a ghost story in 450-500 words?

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i guess u shud rite it urself

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Now kelly were is my keys to the moving van
yelled Mom
I yelled down stairs
I think there on the kitchen counter with box market glass
Yes there they are thanks hon' be back in a minute
I was unpacking my room when I felt a cold breeze go
by but I thought nothing of it until three weeks later
I was reading in bed when my foot was pulled so hard I fell on to the floor then I saw a man smiling at me , he was see threw I tried to scream but nothing came out I got up and ran to my Moms room
and I told her she just hugged me and told me not to read stories
that late at night it gives you weird dreams
I Just brushed it off
but then I felt It again and a again
this time I had a big bruise on my arm
and my friend at school saw it and asked
we what was up with it I Broke down and told her
she asked me over to her house after school
we went on the net and did a search of our town history
and found out that our land that our house was built on ,
there once was a house that once lived a jailer name Jim that the people say around here killed his young wife by pulling her from there bed an beating her to death with a hammer then killed him self
My heart was beating fast
Kelly I think you have a Bad ghost And I think your Mom needs to know this stuff and you need to keep talking to her
I hugged her and went home
Mom never believed me but she got a job transfer to another town and we moved out I will never forget that house or the ghost named Jim

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  THE MYSTERY OF SEVEN DAYS

                  Prof.Albert hongton decided to conduct a tour program for the students of st.patrick's university.they were all thrilled to know this.it was the very first time in last ten years they were having a tour.everyone was overwhelmed and they packed their things a week before itself.
                  on that very day,everyone reached there early morning.it was a winter.it felt melancholy,because the birds were not singing..they were all in their nests.in fact everyone was stll in the arms of sleep.but they all were very happy.
                  the bus was about to leave.everyone sat in the bus.among them was Louis Ron and john Stephen.they were best friends.they all waved their hands to prof.Hongton they were very sad to stay away from him.they have asked him to accompany them.but he was not ready to move about at any cost.some teachers told sarcastically"he won't come..he will never leave his wife alone"yes, he was like that.
  they reached the bliss bungalow at 11 in the night.they were all feeling sleepy.in front of them stood that huge bungalow facing the sea.the water was calm and still.they all got into the bungalow and reached their room Ron and Stephen managed to get a single room for them.
  everyone had their dinner.the dining room was the biggest of all the other room s in the bungalow.then they all went to sleep.john and Ron had a lot to talk about.but they slept in the middle of their talking.

  it was about 2 when Ron came to hear those horrible sounds.it felt as if it came from nowhere.he called john and told the matter but john was in a deep sleep.he didn't even hear Ron calling for him.Ron tried to sleep.but he couldn't.because all those sounds were disturbing his mind.Ron closed his eyes but he couldn't get rid of those sounds.he walked towards the door and his heart start beating much faster.somehow he managed to open the door.
  the bungalow was a three storeyed building and their 256 in the third floor.he was afraid.the sound was still striving through his ears.he walk very slowly he was counting each step as he walk.he could hear the sound of his heartbeat rising much above those harsh sounds.
  as he walk,he felt that the sound was moving away from him.he walked and walked and walked and reached the second floor.but he could see nothing.at last the sound stopped.the big clock in the bungalow striked 4 .it was when Ron realized that he had been walking all the night.

  when Ron reached back his room john was not there.he was in the toilet.Ron took a deep breath and sat on the bed.when john came out after bath,Ron was lying cold in his bed.john tried to wake him up but he was lying as if in a dream.
  john went to the dining room.only Ron wasn't there.everyone else were sitting there and enjoying their breakfast.Mrs.Mary Larra asked john"oh john where's your twin Ron.i never saw you alone.what happened today""he is still sleeping mam"told john.harry oberoy came to john and told"what happened to Ron yesterday.he was wandering in the middle of the night"john didn't mind to answer harry because harry was the enemy of Ron and john.he always used to moke at them by calling them 'sayamese twins',but Harry's words was echoing in john's mind.
  john went back to his room.Ron was still in the bed.john  started thinking about it.he had never seen Ron like this before.he was always active.he just touched Ron ad he wake up screaming out loudly.Mrs.Mary ran to them and asked them what has happened.they told everything was alright and thus they were left all alone.Ron walked towards the window and saw the beautiful scenery of the sea bay.there was a hotel near it and a board in which the word"cemetery"was written in bold letters.it was pointed towards the left.suddenly, he recalled about those horrible sounds that he heard the day before  and he made some connections between the cemetery and the sounds.
  john came near john and asked him why he was wandering all the night.Ron told him everything what he saw and heard the last night.john started laughing as he heard everything.Ron moved away from him as he could not bear that.john was laughing because Ron always used to say something to chill his spine so john thought this was also such a story.but only Ron knew that it wasn't.
                when john stopped  laughing ron wasn't there.he peeped out through the window and he saw Ron walking towards the sea.john could feel his sadness.john ran towards the sea and said sorry to ron.ron wiped his tears and smiled at john.john said"i am there with you.don't worry.within this week we will be finding it out.."these words gave strength to ron but john was not sure whether they could reveal the secret,because they were to stay there only for a week.
  the clock in the room striked 12 and the sound started.john and Ron hadn't slept at all.they were waiting for this moment.they opened the door and start walking,taking the same path of the sound.they walked and walked and walked.ron wasn't afraid that day because he had john to walk with.they couldn't find anything on that day,not even a single clue.
  days passed and they continued their usual routine.when the clock striked 12 they began to walk and would reach their empty handed.it was the fifth day.Ron sat near the window looking at the sea.he hadn't slept for days nor did john.he was thinking of all those mysterious events that had taken place within a single week.he wished if he hadn't came for the tour.he wished if he stayed with prof.hongton and others.john came to Ron and said"let's recall all the events that had taken place one by one,so that we can get some clue".Ron agreed. they took a paper.Ron told what he had heard the first day and john noted the points.then john  told what has happened in the dining room the next day.this time Ron noted the points.john told what Mrs Mary and harry had asked him.suddenly something struck on Ron's mind .he said"it's true that i have been wandering through the corridor.but how come harry know about that?"john was also amazed.Ron continued"now i am sure that the sound was not of a ghost,it must be harry who must be the mastermind behind all this.only he will do this he was always eager to play tricks on us"john told"but Ron since harry had asked me why you were wandering it doesn't mean that he has done everything.it may be when he went to the toilet, he saw you"Ron said"you may be right.but we must keep an eye on him"they planned something and waited for 12.but nothing happened on that night.
  it was the sixth day,their very last day on the huge bliss.ron had lost all hope.but he still had faith that he and john could reveal it that night.the sea was blue and sky was clear.ron and john sat near the window.john said"we must find it today .this is our last chance"Ron assured him"today we won't fail,we will reveal it this very night,the very last night"
  the clock striked 12 and they opened the door and start walking,taking the same path as that of the sound.at last,they reached a big door.it was for the first time they were seeing that door in the bungalow.they had no courage to open the door.but some how they managed to open it.it was a dark room with about thirty windows in all.all wide open before them.they searched the room.they were sure that the sound came from the room.they got a tape recorder and a letter.Ron read it out loudly"be alarmed i am always following you-the ghost"Ron was sure that it was Harry's handwriting.he told john there is no doubt that it is harry behind this.but john wasn't ready to believe that.they took the tape recorder and letter with them and start walking to their room.as they were about to close the huge door,Ron saw something shining .he got a key chain from there.he knew it was Harry's.he had seen harry showing it to everyone so proudly. john said Ron that he was right.
  the next morning,john and Ron went to Mrs.Mary and explained everything to her.he called harry and harry admitted his mistake.he were forced to because Ron and john had evidence.harry was suspended for a week.
                  on the seventh day,they had to say good bye to bliss.john and ron sat in the bus and everyone does.as the bus started to move,harry came to them and told that he was feeling sorry about  what he has done with them.john and ron forgave him and they became friends.ron and john was feeling very happy that he could see such beautiful places and also got a new friend.since then,Ron,john and harry was true friends and Ron never played any tricks on others.

  one day,ron told "it's the ghost who made us friends right.."and he laughed and john and ron accompanied him...

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how is it friends..i wrote it by myself..

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nice story.....

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nice stroy..prerna..

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nice story...

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