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The one that you see has never been ME!
No words are left to say at all, a long time has passed - its fall! the leaves are yellow, the town is brown! you look the princess of aurora, in giorgios' velvet gown! everyday it used to be fine, but today it isn't! because - as this rainbow fades far away! a deeep sad symphony plays! darkness spreads infront of my eyes and for years its gonna stay! i would live with it in my own ways, taking my raft across the lows and the highs! This pain is beyond the one that you feel, when a doctor operates your heart - without anaesthecial aspirin! that sometimes you just die, no hope to spend the rest of your life! because you were the one who kept me alive! and since you are gone its Loss of celebrations, Loss of life! Loss of jubiliations, Loss of smile! i wonder they say its easy to change the form, from know to knew! and to be a little cheesy, forgetting someone you lost-- certainly will never be the case with you! This has been the change, from the way it used to be! and so the one that you see smiling at times-- has never been me! 24 - March Today is a piano recital in my city, 'm playing a song you love, a harmonius melody! as i start to play, my eyes fill up, the 88 keys to euphoria soon seem rough! Somehow in a way, i manage to play! *but then the time becomes slow, so slow it becomes! that days convert to years, and three decades a month! As somehow in between my recital, i see you again! Hopes are revived of my survival, despite of the pain! But soon there are cheers and claps across the hall, i wake up from my dream realise, there's no so called you standing besides the wall! My song too stopped, a sudden catastrophe has hit! my eyes are waterlogged, the hall is candle lit! This time i'm sure, it ain't a dream! It's you all in here- "My Catherine"!! And in no time, you are in my arms! *and we are covered with a million roses, a swarm! 27 - March You said, you have to leave, for completing your role in "Princess Catherine" what could i do, was as still as stone, just said "come back soon!" All the best for your role!! P.S. And i will love you more! 4 - April and there you were glittering on screens, Looking The Royal Dutchess Of My Far Provinces! Returned to home, with a swiss tissot-- a scented envelope had already arrived! t'was from you, you invited me to dine! was much happy - you still remember me! and so it started - being the best League! From purchasing black suits, to dreaming of how it would be from purchasing accessories for the one, because you love the apparels from louis vuitton! 8 - April the doomsday*, the time, finally did arrive, and there you were smliing through the glass* wearing the crown of beaut, sparkling eyes, were sitting on the reserved table at the last! It was my debut date xD was dressed in black! was thinking what to speak to you! "hope everything would go well" And so there was this guy with you, you told me your father has told to see this guy as the partner of your life and you too were happy with this fact, and thus the talks began - HE : "she talks a lot of you! what should i do? to make things with her go fine! -- speak then" ME : "Message her in the times when you can't see her, ask a lot if shes fine, because a lot of care she deserves, send her presents in awkward days of the month, buy her the dress she loved, while visiting the marks and spencer with you! tell her a lot of times that you love her, if you really do! Lend her your shoulder to rest upon, when she's fast asleep! watch with her the movie she loves, "The Ugly Truth" in 3 - D ! Dance with her even if she says no, because she would really look good in your arms, she could dance well though! Learn the songs she loves, try to sing them in front of her, that could certainly make her smile! and treat her like the princess, the queen! caring for her, in every way it could be! i have told you enough, now i should go! SHE : "wait! can't you stay for long?" I Din't answered that but just left... Midnight - (8 April) and so i am standing at the place, where we once danced! its the darkest of the hours, and soon the voyage will commence! A voyage back to ages ago, will you come with me, you ready to go? To rewitness the extraordinary tale of us, to live that time again, to live that love! Because that is the only way for me to believe, that i have lived only once, when together were we! and i still remember those daydreams, which i had sitting right besides of thee! those moments when i held you tight, just before when you were to board your flight! But now i aint near you,* i'm somewhere someplace far away, beacuse without you its nothing, no heart beats at all! I must have told you - you are my Cameron Diaz! 12 - April and now i do fake myself fine, and worthwhile - each passing day a little i die! you had never and will never see! How much you - my love - mean to me! Just Because you didn't notice that guy, under that oak tree! who's waiting for you, has been ME! Composed by - Sachit (c) Innumerable Thoughts (c) Fragile Tears Inc. --- but then... - beginning of dreaming time.. roses - here refers to the cheers given by the people to the relation which was mistaken by the people as a couple, because the girl doesnt't thinks the way the boy do! doomsday - indicating a bad event glass - glass of the restraunt i aint near you.. - refers to not being in contact

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hey crush!!!   nice poem dear.....

for whom u have comopsed this poem????????????

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i love this !!!!!!

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The one that you see has never been ME!





No words are left to say at all,
a long time has passed - its fall!
the leaves are yellow,
the town is brown!
you look the princess of aurora,
in giorgios ' velvet gown!
everyday it used to be fine,
but today it isn 't!
because - as this rainbow fades far away!
a deeep sad symphony plays!
darkness spreads infront of my eyes
and for years its gonna stay!
i would live with it in my own ways,
taking my raft across the lows and the highs!


This pain is beyond the one that you feel,
when a doctor operates your heart -
without anaesthecial aspirin!
that sometimes you just die,
no hope to spend the rest of your life!
because you were the one who kept me alive!
and since you are gone its
Loss of celebrations,
Loss of life!
Loss of jubiliations,
Loss of smile!
i wonder they say its easy
to change the form,
from know to knew!
and to be a little cheesy,
forgetting someone you lost--
certainly will never be the case with you!


This has been the change,
from the way it used to be!
and so the one that you see
smiling at times-- has never been me!


24 - March
Today is a piano recital in my city,
'm playing a song you love, a harmonius melody!
as i start to play, my eyes fill up,
the 88 keys to euphoria soon seem rough!
Somehow in a way, i manage to play!
*but then the time becomes slow,
so slow it becomes!
that days convert to years,
and three decades a month!
As somehow in between my recital,
i see you again!
Hopes are revived of my survival,
despite of the pain!


But soon there are cheers and claps across the hall,
i wake up from my dream realise,
there 's no so called you standing besides the wall!
My song too stopped,
a sudden catastrophe has hit!
my eyes are waterlogged,
the hall is candle lit!
This time i 'm sure,
it ain 't a dream!
It 's you all in here-
"My Catherine"!!
And in no time, you are in my arms!
*and we are covered with a million roses, a swarm!




27 - March
You said, you have to leave,
for completing your role in "Princess Catherine"
what could i do,
was as still as stone,
just said "come back soon!"
All the best for your role!!
P.S.
And i will love you more!




4 - April
and there you were glittering on screens,
Looking The Royal Dutchess Of My Far Provinces!
Returned to home, with a swiss tissot--
a scented envelope had already arrived!
t 'was from you, you invited me to dine!
was much happy - you still remember me!
and so it started - being the best League!


From purchasing black suits,
to dreaming of how it would be
from purchasing accessories for the one,
because you love the apparels from louis vuitton!


8 - April
the doomsday*, the time, finally did arrive,
and there you were smliing through the glass*
wearing the crown of beaut, sparkling eyes,
were sitting on the reserved table at the last!
It was my debut date xD was dressed in black!
was thinking what to speak to you!
"hope everything would go well"


And so there was this guy with you,
you told me your father has told to
see this guy
as the partner of your life
and you too were happy with this fact,
and thus the talks began -
HE : "she talks a lot of you!
what should i do?
to make things with her go fine! -- speak then"
ME : "Message her in the times
when you can 't see her,
ask a lot if shes fine,
because a lot of care she deserves,

send her presents in awkward days of the month,
buy her the dress she loved,
while visiting the marks and spencer with you!
tell her a lot of times that you love her,
if you really do!

Lend her your shoulder to rest upon,
when she 's fast asleep!
watch with her the movie she loves,
"The Ugly Truth" in 3 - D !

Dance with her even if she says no,
because she would really look good in your arms,
she could dance well though!

Learn the songs she loves,
try to sing them in front of her,
that could certainly make her smile!

and treat her like the princess, the queen!
caring for her, in every way it could be!
i have told you enough,
now i should go!

SHE : "wait! can 't you stay for long?"


I Din 't answered that but just left...

Midnight - (8 April)
and so i am standing at the place,
where we once danced!
its the darkest of the hours,
and soon the voyage will commence!
A voyage back to ages ago,
will you come with me, you ready to go?
To rewitness the extraordinary tale of us,
to live that time again, to live that love!
Because that is the only way for me to believe,
that i have lived only once, when together were we!
and i still remember those daydreams,
which i had sitting right besides of thee!
those moments when i held you tight,
just before when you were to board your flight!


But now i aint near you,*
i 'm somewhere someplace far away,
beacuse without you its nothing,
no heart beats at all!
I must have told you -
you are my Cameron Diaz!




12 - April


and now i do fake myself fine,
and worthwhile -
each passing day a little i die!
you had never and will never see!
How much you - my love - mean to me!
Just Because you didn 't notice that guy,
under that oak tree!
who 's waiting for you, has been ME!

i love ur poem ............

& i 'm replying it back 2 u.....

 

 

 

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thank youu !! 

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oh!i could not read such a big thing .i'll try one day buddy!

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oh god thats a big one. too boring to read. but was good

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