HOW TO WRITE A STORY ABOUT ALIEN ? GIVE ME A SHORT STORY FOR EXAMPLE.

once upon a time there lived an alien who lived in mars.that alien is a female alien and her name is KHUKHU.she one eye and four legs not only she all the aliens who lived in mars they have 1 eye and 4 legs.they dint want water,air etc to live.They has very short life and they can live only for 10years. They dint have schools for study they computers in their home to study.Their planet is very well devloped compare to our palnet.Kukhu is very happy with her palnet.......

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thanks charu latha

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my eyes hurt seeing what u have written...

Had to correct the piece of junk u had written.. sorry didn't want 2 be mean.. but sister.. what d hell have u written???

* instead of once upon a time there lived an alien who lived in mars... you could write.. ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS AN ALIEN WHO LIVED IN MARS...

* She one eye and four legs?????? its... she HAS one eye and 4 legs..

* not only she all the aliens who lived in mars they have 1 eye and 4 legs???????????? CORRECTION: NOT ONLY HER BUT ALL THE ALIENS WHO LIVED ON MARS HAVE 1 EYE AND 4 LEGS...

* they has very short life..??? plz.... THEY HAVE AVERY SHORT LIFE...

*They dint have schools for study they computers in their home to study..??They DON'T have schoolsTO STUDYIN, INSTEADthey HAVE computers in their homes to study..??

* Their are spelling mistakes as well...

Plz do edit/ recheck ur answers before you send it to others..!!!

take care..!! :)

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