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Write a letter to your grandmother who you visited a few days back. Share with her the experiences of living in the village.

New Delhi − 110017

 September 21, 2011

Dear grandmother,

Hello

  How are you my grandmother? And I hope you are fine. Now I am remembering those days which I spend with you in the village so I thought I should write my experiences of living in the village with you.

 

When I started living with you first my opinion is that a village is for small people and very untidy place is that, and I am not comfortable with you and I want to go back to my home. But slowly and gradually my opinion changes when I saw a village is the real place where actually a man is living as I came to know that in village so much of peace, a person is spending half of time in a day with families , mostly joint families are living ,etc. so it’s a beautiful place , having so many tourist place. I told my friends  about your beautiful house that is located close to the lake; how you used to cook delicious meals for all of us and how we used to go for long walks in the morning in park located near your house. They were thrilled to know how we used to take the cows to the fields for grazing. I also told them about the stories you narrated to me every night. I can now understand the reason why you do not want to shift to the city. Now that you are so used to the peaceful life of the village, I am sure you would not be able to adjust to the hustle and bustle of city life. I am already waiting for the next vacation so that I can be with you again. You take good care of yourself and send a reply as soon as you get this letter.

With lots of love,

Your loving granddaughter,

shivani

       

Such questions are meant to test your writing skills and should be attempted on your own. However, these points might help you elaborate:
- Give your full address at the top, you have mentioned only the city.
- Use punctuation: for example, you have omitted the exclamation mark after 'Hello' in your letter.
- Use simple past tense as far as possible.
- Use shorter and simpler sentences as then mistakes would be less.
- The latter part of the letter is well written.
- Start your name with a capital letter.

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lovely dear........

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 nice but very long

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 hi! 

its cool! but i think its too long

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can u make it into 3 para's and show pls

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 that's to good but as all r saying you should make it short it will be better than

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letter has to be  in 3 paras.

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This would probably be my letter!

 

Rakshna

Delhi

29/12/12

Grandma

Village(name it)

 

Dear Grandma,

How are you doing?Hope you are appy and taking your medicines at time. After I returned to Delhi I am always seen telling everyone abut my trip to our village.I just loved it so much and I thankyou for making my holidays special.I would love to share my experience with you so I thought writing a letter would make it extra special.(Obama too writes letter to his daughter)

I thoght initially that going to our village would be big time boring cause there is nothing extraordinary in there like a Burj Khalifa or Eiffel Tower.But this vacation proved me that our village could always be in the list of world wonders.Our village to me was like a fiction come true,because i have always read about cowsgrazing,the peacefulness,sound of wind,rains and the smile of a child could always be soothing to our eyes.Everytime I read thse these thought lingered in my mind"Is that possible?.....A life without box office or PSP" The time I landed there my moods just made a huge revolution and changed all these ideas.

I statredloving every aspect of thevillage......the humbleness and innocence of people,their attitude. Every morning walk I used to go with grandpa and the breeze.The forest,the goats,the dogs and the chickens and our house in the middle of nowhere.......the riverside and most ofall i loved it when I got a chance to jump into the well.................This trip has been a lesson to bascally understand that a villageman is 100times fitter than a cityguy.........and most of all

1.Ever wanna learn diving dont you ever step into the pool, intead learn to fall into the well.

@. Travelling in a cart is times better than driving a BMW between a jam packed traffic.

3. Wanna become the next Usain Bolt.....learn to run behind cows.

Thankyou grandma......you made my holiday special and loved the rotis you make........Nothing can beat it.

Maybe yo should try coming here, I am thinking you might love my city too.

Take care Grandma and dot forget to take your pills.

With love,

Your granddaughter

Rakshna

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 i just think its sort of obvious that everyone would probably think in the same context....Maybe you should try adding some humor and bring it alive.....

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Awesome and lively...

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 god very bad english and lots of grammatical errors

for example:-

spent not spend

experience not experiences because you only visited village once

and the rest i hope you catch it yourself as i am not reading the rest of itm(seems boring)

sorry but that is the truth :)

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 and @rakshna- amazing girl your english is like music to my ears (ok that is a bit me exaggerating) anyways good job and on the scale of 10, i give you 9.5 :) -0.5 for the spelling mistakes otherwise it was amazing :)

lots of love

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But deli is not a village

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good writing skill you have can you give me letter on your friend is not talking to me.write a leeter to tell him he is my best friend

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iam fine

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