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Q;- How did helen feel that a visit to the Midway Plaisance was like the Arabian Nights?
Ans:-Helen felt her childhood fantasies fulfilled when she went to visit the World Fair in the year 1883. She visited the Midway Plaisance which seemed like the stories of Arabian Nights to her. It was full of novelties and interest. She visited the India she had read about ; represented by bazaar, idols of Shiva and the elephant gods. There was the land of pyramids concentrated in a model. The pyramids mosques and processions of camels represented Cairo. She went on board a Viking ship. The Cape of Good hope with its diamond mines were some of the other things that caught Helen’s fancy. A little distance from the ship there was a model of the Santa Maria. The captain showed her Columbus’s cabin and the desk with an hour glass on it. The small instrument impressed her most because it made her think how weary the heroic navigator must have felt as he saw the sand dropping grain by grain. She even had the permission to feel the exhibits at the fair. This made her experience even better. This is how Helen enjoyed her time at the World Fair. She was fascinated with everything as it was like a dream. So, she said that Midway Plaisance was like the Arabian Nights.
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Helen felt her childhood fantasies were fulfilled when she visited the World Fair in the year 1883. She visited the Midway Plaisance which seemed to be like the stories of Arabian Nights to her. It was full of novelties and interest. She visited India, she had read about; represented by bazaar, idols of Shiva and the elephant gods. There was the land of pyramids concentrated in a model. The pyramids mosques and processions of camels represented Cairo. She went on board a Viking ship. The Cape of Good hope with its diamond mines was one of the many things that caught Helen’s fancy. At a little distance from the ship, there was a model of the Santa Maria. The captain showed her Columbus’s cabin and the desk with an hour glass on it. The small instrument impressed her the most because it made her think how weary the heroic navigator must have felt as he saw the sand dropping grain by grain. She even had the permission to feel the exhibits at the fair. This made her experience even better. This is how Helen enjoyed her time at the World Fair. She was fascinated with everything as it was like a dream. Hence, she said that Midway Plaisance was like the Arabian Nights.
You have done an excellent job. Keep it up!
Regards
The answer has been edited and the changes have been highlighted in bold.
Helen felt her childhood fantasies were fulfilled when she visited the World Fair in the year 1883. She visited the Midway Plaisance which seemed to be like the stories of Arabian Nights to her. It was full of novelties and interest. She visited India, she had read about; represented by bazaar, idols of Shiva and the elephant gods. There was the land of pyramids concentrated in a model. The pyramids mosques and processions of camels represented Cairo. She went on board a Viking ship. The Cape of Good hope with its diamond mines was one of the many things that caught Helen’s fancy. At a little distance from the ship, there was a model of the Santa Maria. The captain showed her Columbus’s cabin and the desk with an hour glass on it. The small instrument impressed her the most because it made her think how weary the heroic navigator must have felt as he saw the sand dropping grain by grain. She even had the permission to feel the exhibits at the fair. This made her experience even better. This is how Helen enjoyed her time at the World Fair. She was fascinated with everything as it was like a dream. Hence, she said that Midway Plaisance was like the Arabian Nights.
You have done an excellent job. Keep it up!
Regards