An essay on : society is influenced more by show than by substance.
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  • People are very materialistic these days and it is very easy to get influenced by a flashy accessory or any other expensive entity.
  • It takes a lot of time to get to know a person which many people don't have. So instead they prefer to judge the person on the basis of his wardrobe or his assets. People start making assumptions which can be fatally wrong given that the other person is completely unknown to you.
  • Brands have great influences on people and sure appearances can get you a lot but you won't be able to make long lasting friends. Because people will be around you for your money not because of your qualities and that is not how long lasting relations are made. 
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Show? and ?Substances? are universally opposed concepts, and have passed into common parlance. But they require a brief expounding. ?Show? here implies attractive and tempting elements while ?substances? stands for internal qualities or elements of virtue. The opposition between the two is too obvious for explanation. Real substance might, and does, influence individuals, but very rarely a society. The latter is an assorted conglomerate or a compact of individuals bound by a common interest that is conducive to a healthy living. Society, such as this, can never remain ever alert against the elements of show and glamour, especially in this age of consumerism. I shall, better, point it through a personal experience.
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