As if on cue, a young ,fit and pretty girl appeared in the doorway panting as if she had eluded a bull . Her red hair were covered with sweat . Almost as on instinct Bruce ran a hand on his brown hair.
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As if on cue, a young, fit and pretty girl appeared in the doorway panting as if she had eluded a bull. Her red hair was covered with sweat. Almost on instinct, Bruce ran his hand through his own brown hair.
Regards
As if on cue, a young, fit and pretty girl appeared in the doorway panting as if she had eluded a bull. Her red hair was covered with sweat. Almost on instinct, Bruce ran his hand through his own brown hair.
Regards