Being a hot day,we remained indoors ..can anyone correct it please!?

what to correct???
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It's grammar and logics are correct what else to correct?
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WAS A HOT DAY,SO WE REMAINED INDOORS
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What is wrong in the question?
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The sentence given is actually correct.
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It was a hot day so we remaind indoors.
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It was a hot day, hence we remained indoors.
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IT BEING A HOT DAY, WE REMAINED INDOORS
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it was a hot day so we stayed indoors
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its correct !
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what needs to be corrected
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