CHARACTERISTICS
AUNT POLLY- Aunt Polly is an old woman. She is the aunt of Tom Sawyer.She loves her nephew but sometimes gets angry with him. She makes Tom help her. She is sometimes fooled by Tom.
BEN -Ben is a friend of Tom.He was able to whitewash the fence on the condition that he would have to give something to Tom in return.He gave Tom an apple.He painted with bold strokes.He also went swimming with Tom.
ALYONUSHKA-She is an orphan. He is the elder sister of Ivanushka.She had to find job to feed herself and her little brother.She later became wife of merchant.She is also very kind helpful.
IVANUSHKA-He is an orphan.He is the brother of Alyonushka.He is very small.He accompanied his sister.He later became brother-in-law of his sister's husband.
MERCHANT-He is a kind hearted and helpful man.He was rich.He later married Alyonushka.He had many servants.He lived happily with his wife and her brother.
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AUNT POLLY- Aunt Polly was an old woman. She was the aunt of Tom Sawyer. She loved her nephew but sometimes got angry with him. She made Tom help her. She was sometimes fooled by Tom.
BEN -Ben was a friend of Tom. He was able to whitewash the fence on the condition that he would have to give something to Tom in return. He gave Tom an apple. He painted with bold strokes. He also went swimming with Tom.
ALYONUSHKA-She was an orphan. She was the elder sister of Ivanushka. She had to find job to feed herself and her little brother. She later became the wife of a merchant.She was also very kind and helpful.
IVANUSHKA- He was an orphan. He was the brother of Alyonushka. He was very small. He accompanied his sister.
MERCHANT-He was a kind hearted and helpful man. He was rich.He later married Alyonushka. He had many servants. He lived happily with his wife and her brother.
The corrections are underlined. The tense has been changed to simple past tense as there were to many shifts in your writing from simple present to past tense.
BEN -Ben was a friend of Tom. He was able to whitewash the fence on the condition that he would have to give something to Tom in return. He gave Tom an apple. He painted with bold strokes. He also went swimming with Tom.
ALYONUSHKA-She was an orphan. She was the elder sister of Ivanushka. She had to find job to feed herself and her little brother. She later became the wife of a merchant.She was also very kind and helpful.
IVANUSHKA- He was an orphan. He was the brother of Alyonushka. He was very small. He accompanied his sister.
MERCHANT-He was a kind hearted and helpful man. He was rich.He later married Alyonushka. He had many servants. He lived happily with his wife and her brother.
The corrections are underlined. The tense has been changed to simple past tense as there were to many shifts in your writing from simple present to past tense.