Dear Expert Anushka Singhal, Please give your feedback on the above article and suggest some better vocabulary words and corections.
Thanks a lot maam....
Dear student,
The article given above is a very nice attempt. However, here are a few changes that you can make:
The article given above is a very nice attempt. However, here are a few changes that you can make:
- Water is the most essential element for the existence and survival of human life on any planet.
- Despite the fact that three-fourth part of the Earth is covered with water, only about two percent of it is categorized as fresh water and which is accessible or ready to use.
- A research held at the University of Science, London has stated that by 2050 the entire fresh water reserve would be almost exhausted.
- Moreover, in remote and arid areas people face ghastly situations due to lack of clean drinking water.
- ...long distances to fetch water.
- If water is not conserved, the day when the entire earth would become arid and lifeless is not far away.
- ...importance to conserve water for future generations.
- ...must be disseminated and understood.
- ...curb activities that require excessive use or lead to wastage of water.