Diary entry
Taking help from the information given below make a diary entry describe the horribles experience that you had when your shoes and main bag were stolen during a railways journey .
Dear student,
You have aptly answered your own query. Some corrections are as follows:
- Use a capital letter to start a new sentence.
- The train was at New Delhi station.
- It was missing: certainly my belongings had been stolen.
- All my documents and cash were in the bag. I panicked!
- I rang up one of my relatives in Delhi and informed him of the miserable situation I was in.
- But then, I saw a gentleman standing at the platform with my bag and shoes: he was an angel who had saved me from embarrassment and humiliation.
- He had found a suspicious looking man trying to run away with my stuff and had thrown the bag and shoes on being questioned.
Regards
You have aptly answered your own query. Some corrections are as follows:
- Use a capital letter to start a new sentence.
- The train was at New Delhi station.
- It was missing: certainly my belongings had been stolen.
- All my documents and cash were in the bag. I panicked!
- I rang up one of my relatives in Delhi and informed him of the miserable situation I was in.
- But then, I saw a gentleman standing at the platform with my bag and shoes: he was an angel who had saved me from embarrassment and humiliation.
- He had found a suspicious looking man trying to run away with my stuff and had thrown the bag and shoes on being questioned.
Regards