Edit this paragraph: a)When our Earth was covered with water,all creatures b)had to swin on it p When the water - English - Error Correction Editing

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Edit this paragraph:
a)When our Earth was covered with water,all creatures
b)had to swin on it p When the water subsided
c)and land appeared the sea creatures crawled out and
d)turned to breathing and walk on land When there are not enough
plants left to eat, they learnt to hunt and
e)kill for the food Things are still changing and if
one want to survive, you will have to change too Look even
Bombay has changed Fifty years past there were
hills,gardens,beautiful villas where now you see
shops, traffic , crowds and slums

Bhaswati Talukdar · Accepted Answer

Error
Correction

When our Earth was cover with water,all
creatures
cover
covered

had to swim on it When the water
subsided
on
in

and the land appeared, the sea creatures
crawled out and

turned to breathing and walk on land
When there
walk
walked

are not enough plants left to eat, they
learnt to hunt and
are
were

kill for the food Things are still
changing and if

one want to survive, you will have to
change too Look even
one
you

Bombay has changed Fifty years past
there were
past
ago

hills,gardens,beautiful villas where now
you see
where
whereas

shops, traffic , crowds and slums

	*Error*	*Correction*
When our Earth was cover with water,all creatures	cover	covered
had to swim on it. When the water subsided	on	in
and the land appeared, the sea creatures crawled out and
turned to breathing and walk on land. When there	walk	walked
are not enough plants left to eat, they learnt to hunt and	are	were
kill for the food. Things are still changing and if
one want to survive, you will have to change too. Look even	one	you
Bombay has changed. Fifty years past there were	past	ago
hills,gardens,beautiful villas where now you see	where	whereas
shops, traffic , crowds and slums.