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More of the fun and excitement in your life come More Much

from use your senses. Sences open up a

world who is full of sights, sounds, smells,

tastes and things to touch. The sharp your senses and

the more you use it, more enjoyable each

of this worlds becomes for you.

For instant, a painter can see shades

and shapes which little gifted

people could not see.

 

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More of the fun and excitement in your life comes

a) More

a) Much

from use your senses. Senses open up a

b) use

b) using

world who is full of sights, sounds, smells

c) who

c) which

tastes and things to touch. The sharp your senses and

d) sharp

d) sharper

the more you use it, the more enjoyable each

e) it

e) them

of these become for you.

f) become

f) becomes

For instant, a painter can see shades

g) instant

g) instance

and shapes which little gifted

h) little

h) many

people could not see.

 

 

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