He saw around him . What he saw was ..... horrible . It was disgusting . He screamed and then fainted even before falling to the ground. A man laughed ruthlessly . ‘So Andrew`s little trick has been successful .So cowardly ,that man. Just fainted at the sight of the Army of the Dead. Test him for darkness and secrecy, Va o2.’ Almost at once two mechanical arms sprang to life.
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He saw around him. What he saw was ... horrible. It was disgusting. He screamed and then fainted even before falling to the ground.
A man laughed ruthlessly. (If this character, the ‘man’, has already been introduced, change the article to ‘the’.Otherwise, leave it as it is.)
“So Andrew`s little trick has been successful. So cowardly, this man just fainted at the sight of the Army of the Dead. Test him for darkness and secrecy, Va o2.” Almost at once, two mechanical arms sprang to life.
Regards
He saw around him. What he saw was ... horrible. It was disgusting. He screamed and then fainted even before falling to the ground.
A man laughed ruthlessly. (If this character, the ‘man’, has already been introduced, change the article to ‘the’.Otherwise, leave it as it is.)
“So Andrew`s little trick has been successful. So cowardly, this man just fainted at the sight of the Army of the Dead. Test him for darkness and secrecy, Va o2.” Almost at once, two mechanical arms sprang to life.
Regards