I had write a story so pls check it correct my mistake also give me marks out of 8
Dear student,
The corrections for the first paragraph are as follows:
- a king named
- was a very intelligent
- always benefited the people of the kingdom
- faced by the king was that
- people of the kingdom were very lazy
- palace and village were in perpetual loss
- For the rest of the story: please keep the tense consistent to simple past tense.
- Be careful you use articles (a, an, the) wherever required.
- Make shorter sentences to avoid grammatical mistakes.
- Check spellings by consulting a dictionary.
- Your use of prepositions needs to be based on the meaning you wish to convey.
- Moral: please do not encourage being lazy by writing 'there is a time to be lazy'.
Instead, the moral can be: 'Laziness is a negative energy, instead be proactive!'
I would mark you 3/8.
Regards
The corrections for the first paragraph are as follows:
- a king named
- was a very intelligent
- always benefited the people of the kingdom
- faced by the king was that
- people of the kingdom were very lazy
- palace and village were in perpetual loss
- For the rest of the story: please keep the tense consistent to simple past tense.
- Be careful you use articles (a, an, the) wherever required.
- Make shorter sentences to avoid grammatical mistakes.
- Check spellings by consulting a dictionary.
- Your use of prepositions needs to be based on the meaning you wish to convey.
- Moral: please do not encourage being lazy by writing 'there is a time to be lazy'.
Instead, the moral can be: 'Laziness is a negative energy, instead be proactive!'
I would mark you 3/8.
Regards