I wanted some feedback for the answer that I have written. The ques is - Is act of hero-worshipping justified by the teenagers ?
- It is a very good attempt!
- Just be careful of subject-verb agreement: 'Sophie fantasises...'.
- Incomplete sentence: 'That she met him...'
- You may add: Sometimes teenagers indulge in petty crimes to be able to buy clothes or gadgets endorsed by their idols. They might end up following their idols blindly: developing poor habits like drinking, smoking, etc.
- Just be careful of subject-verb agreement: 'Sophie fantasises...'.
- Incomplete sentence: 'That she met him...'
- You may add: Sometimes teenagers indulge in petty crimes to be able to buy clothes or gadgets endorsed by their idols. They might end up following their idols blindly: developing poor habits like drinking, smoking, etc.