In a country as vast of ours, keeping (e g) a eye on every child is a difficult task - English - Error Correction Editing

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In a country as vast of ours, keeping (e g) a eye on every child is
a difficult task
Many children are still employing in factories while its childhood
goes unnoticed
They wash utensils when they should been playing with dolls, toys
and cricket bats

Roshini Anie Thomas · Accepted Answer

In a country as vast as (of) ours, keeping an (a) eye on every
child is a difficult task
Many children are still employed (employing) in factories while
their (its) childhood goes unnoticed
They wash utensils when they should be (been) playing with dolls,
toys and cricket bats

In a country as vast of ours, keeping (e.g) a eye on every child is a difficult task. Many children are still employing in factories while its childhood goes unnoticed. They wash utensils when they should been playing with dolls, toys and cricket bats.

In a country as vast of ours, keeping (e.g) a eye on every child is a difficult task.
Many children are still employing in factories while its childhood goes unnoticed.
They wash utensils when they should been playing with dolls, toys and cricket bats.