Is this essay nice, tell if any errors.

Dear Student.
There are a lot of grammatical errors in your answer. We would suggest you to take help of your teacher. However here are some errors:   
  • he had called some of....
  • soul hunter line is incorrect 
  • he had made his brother 
  • a little bit scared ....
  • took out his camera... 
  • many voices 
  • chased us...
  • all my friends knew....

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in the 4th line has will not come. HAD will come
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