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"Don't you think it would be a good idea if I let my hair grow out," she said looking at her profile again.
"I forgot, this is your first duty of this kind. Isn't it sorry! I can't ask one of the other boys to take your place, but you'll have to get used to it. It's part of your job," said Haley.
The distance from my village to Amritsar is three hundred miles by walking. Begging rides both in trucks and cars, in some way after a number of days, I reached the city of Amritsar, the city of gold temple. When I reached there tired, hungry and dirty, it was late in the night.
Within days of reaching Nairobi, we started out on our first safari. Myself, a friend named Chander and some twenty porters and headed for the district where rhinos were said to be plentiful.

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