My report, please correct
Serious Road accident
A serious road accident occurred yesterday morning. When i was going to college i saw a car and a bus racing and suddenly an old man crossing the road while the car racing. The car collided on a road side tree and the brick hit the man. The man was seriously injured. The people called the police and the investigation going on and the man went to G.M.C.H.
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- Refer to the Website to find the format of a report.
- and suddenly an old man...
while the car racing - The car crashed into a roadside tree and bick (?) (brick / bark of the tree) hit the man.
- The people called the police.
- and investigations were carried out
- The man was taken to...