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Dear Student,
Your advertisement is correct. What I would urge you to do is work on the conciseness of the text. This will happen as you practice more questions. Also, phone number and email id should be mentioned.
1 change is required: Young lady belonging to the age group of 21-25; instead of what has been written by you. This makes it sound sophisticated and formal.
Regards
Your advertisement is correct. What I would urge you to do is work on the conciseness of the text. This will happen as you practice more questions. Also, phone number and email id should be mentioned.
1 change is required: Young lady belonging to the age group of 21-25; instead of what has been written by you. This makes it sound sophisticated and formal.
Regards