please check the debate writing

Dear Student.

Here are the errors:

• You have written "situation" twice in the second paragraph.
• Para 2: "where a student does not pass..."
• Para 2: "The poor results of this policy are..."
• Para 3: "They do not compete..."
• Para 3: No need for the word "there" in the line "Life, in general, is very competitive...."

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