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Please check this advertisement writing.Your mother had recently found the ingredients to a natural hair oil that promotes growth of hair.Advertise the product and give a suitable name to the product.

- It is a good advertisement.
- It covers all the points well.
- My only concern is the word limit: usually the word limit for advertisements is 50 words.
- In that case, you have far exceeded the word limit.
- In an advertisement, you need not write complete sentences.
- Write in phrases instead to convey the same meaning.
- For example: Natural hair oil
                         Combination of coconut and amla oil
                         Makes hair rich, black and strong

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nice
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ADVERTISEMENT ; IN MANY CHECKINGS OF HAIR OIL WE FOUND THAT 90% COMPANIES PRODUCE BAD QUALITIES OF OIL. SO WE ARE INTRODUCING NEW VARIETY OF OIL KNOWN AS BLACK SHINY HAIR OIL. THIS OIL IS MADE BY PURE NATURE ELEMENT. YOU CAN OBTAIN IT EVERYWHERE FROM  30 MARCH 2017.
PRODUCT NAME ;   SHINE HAIR OIL
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 it's nice but you can add it would prevent hair fall.otherwise it's nice
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U DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE
LOL
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Nice
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You can change the name of the oil.
Why don't you just name it as Herbal oil ? It sounds simple and pretty good :)
And you have to add 2 more ingredients which had been used in making the oil.
'The oil is unimaginably cheap ' You can write like this !
The rest of the lines are nice !
Hope it helps :)
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Good
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Good..
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