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You have made a great attempt. However, here are a few corrections that you can make:
You have made a great attempt. However, here are a few corrections that you can make:
- line 2: thread - threat
- line 12: factor - factors
- line 13: demand of - demand for; increase - increases
- line 22: suffers to afford decent - struggles to afford a decent; The life becomes - Life becomes