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YOUR BROTHER PHONED YOU FROM PUNE THAT HE IS PROCEEDING TOP DELHI FOR AN INTERVIEW.WRITE A MESSAGE FOR YOUR FATHER WHO WAS ABSENT FROM HOME.

Dear Student,
Given below are some of the corrections you have to make in your writing.
  • Do not use the word date and time.
  • There is no need to mention the day.
  • from Pune and said that 
Kindly make these changes. The rest are correct.

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11th MARCH,2017                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         
Dear father,

Brother called up today morning to you but unfortunately it was me who took up the phone. Since you are away from home he wanted me to convey you the message that he was proceeding from Pune to Delhi for an interview and asked you to call him when you are back. See you soon.

Sandipan

Note: Hi my name is Jis. I saw your question and this is my answer for that. This is the way it is supposed to be written. Best of luck for your English exam if you have.
 
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 s its right
 
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actually jis, your format is wrong whereas sandipan's format is correct. keep it up sandipan!
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Jis is right
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Sandipan is correct
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