Please check this message writing.

Dear Student,

The question has been well attempted in the correct format.
A few points may be considered:
  • Instead of writing, "called to inform me", you could have stayed with "called to inform", because Neetu had not called to inform Jeetu's mother but Jeetu himself.
  • In order to decrease the number of words used, the body of the message could have been, "Your friend Neetu called to inform that you have a one hour Hindi extra class tomorrow after school hours."

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It is correct.
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Yes,it is correct !
But,if you want you can change the sentence like this after "that"
'That tomorrow you'll be having hindi extra classes for an hour '
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