Please check this message writing.
Dear Student,
The question has been well attempted in the correct format.
A few points may be considered:
The question has been well attempted in the correct format.
A few points may be considered:
- Instead of writing, "called to inform me", you could have stayed with "called to inform", because Neetu had not called to inform Jeetu's mother but Jeetu himself.
- In order to decrease the number of words used, the body of the message could have been, "Your friend Neetu called to inform that you have a one hour Hindi extra class tomorrow after school hours."