Please check this notice writing.
YOU ARE GAUTAM,THE CULTURAL SECRETARY OF DAV PUBLIC SCHOOL,MIDNAPORE.WRITE A NOTICE TO INVITE STUDENTS TO PERFORM RABINDRA JAYANTI.
DAV PUBLIC SCHOOL, MIDNAPORE
NOTICE
INVITING STUDENT'S TO PERFORM
RABINDRA JAYANTI
10 March, 2017
It is hereby informed that there is a cultural programme in the occasion of Rabindra Jayanti on 8 May, 2017 from 5 pm to 7 pm in our school auditorium. The programme includes drama, songs, dance, poetry etc. Interested students to give their names to the undersigned by 7 April, 2017.
Make it a great success.
Gautan
Cultural Secretary
NOTICE
INVITING STUDENT'S TO PERFORM
RABINDRA JAYANTI
It is hereby informed that there is a cultural programme in the occasion of Rabindra Jayanti on 8 May, 2017 from 5 pm to 7 pm in our school auditorium. The programme includes drama, songs, dance, poetry etc. Interested students to give their names to the undersigned by 7 April, 2017.
Make it a great success.
Gautan
Cultural Secretary
Dear Student,
Given below are some of the mistakes in your work.
Thank you.
Given below are some of the mistakes in your work.
- In the topic, add 'on' between perform and Rabindra Jayanti. (perform on Rabindra)
- programme on the occassion
- The programmes include
- dance and poetry recitation.
- Interested students ought to
- by 7th April
- Avoid 'make it a great success'
Thank you.