Please check this report writing.
Write a report on a serious bomb explosion.
Points:-1)Cause-A powerful bomb exploded inside the shop.The shop completely destroyed.Nearby shops also get partially damaged,whole area plunged into darkness.
2)Casualities-5 killed,9 injured persons taken to the Guwahati Medical College Hospital:Condition of six person serious:Human leaves strude all over the blast side:Search for more bodies was on.
3)Reason:One terrorist group claimed of that blast.

Dear Student,
Given below are some of the corrections you ought to make in your work.
  • You need not mention the name of the newspaper in the report.
  • Avoid the word 'by'. Write the name on the left hand side and the designation in the next line.
  • Guhwati, yesterday evening
  • The explosion completely destroyed the shop. The nearby shops were also partially damaged and a complete darkness came upon the area.
  • 5 people were killed while 9 others were injured.
  • The condition of six persons were serious.
  • Human leave strude... ???? what does this sentence mean? I am unable to understand.
  • The search for more missing persons continue.
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it is nice but you should write it three paragraphs first introduction  next about the topic and at last write a conclusion
 
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its nice
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keep it up its outstanding  but always remember write 3 para 1st introduction then about topic and at last you mast have to write a conclusion
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you need to work on it more cause it's quite short, u need to exaggerate as the reader should get attracted to read the report.
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