Please check this report writing.
Write a report on a serious bomb explosion.
Points:-1)Cause-A powerful bomb exploded inside the shop.The shop completely destroyed.Nearby shops also get partially damaged,whole area plunged into darkness.
2)Casualities-5 killed,9 injured persons taken to the Guwahati Medical College Hospital:Condition of six person serious:Human leaves strude all over the blast side:Search for more bodies was on.
3)Reason:One terrorist group claimed of that blast.
Dear Student,
Given below are some of the corrections you ought to make in your work.
Thank you.
Given below are some of the corrections you ought to make in your work.
- You need not mention the name of the newspaper in the report.
- Avoid the word 'by'. Write the name on the left hand side and the designation in the next line.
- Guhwati, yesterday evening
- The explosion completely destroyed the shop. The nearby shops were also partially damaged and a complete darkness came upon the area.
- 5 people were killed while 9 others were injured.
- The condition of six persons were serious.
- Human leave strude... ???? what does this sentence mean? I am unable to understand.
- The search for more missing persons continue.
Thank you.