please check this report writing

Dear student,

It is a great attempt. However, you should make the following corrections:

• Heading: Teachers' Day Celebration
• The energetic 'welcome' performance... (line 11)
• ...performed a drama to spread the messages and ideas... (line 14)
• On this occasion...(line 16)
• Everyone left the hall feeling positive and happy. (line 21)

Regards