please check this report writing

Dear student,

It is a great attempt. However, you should make the following corrections:
  • Heading: Teachers' Day Celebration
  • The energetic 'welcome' performance... (line 11)
  • ...performed a drama to spread the messages and ideas... (line 14)
  • On this occasion...(line 16)
  • Everyone left the hall feeling positive and happy. (line 21)

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It's correct and nicely written
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