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Birth
I am Angela of 8 studying in ens, Sharjah. I was born on 8th of june 2000. I am 13 years. I live currently at abushagara, Sharjah. My hometown is in Pathanamthitta ,Kerala. My mother tongue is Malayalam.
Parents
To tell about my parents and sibling, My father is a administrative manager and my mom is doing her own business of Ornament making and stitching. My brother is studying at college in Sharjah. He is 21 years old. The real fact is that I never fight with my brother but it is my brother who starts fighting with me. I just sit simply and he starts pinching me for no reason! That’s what make me angry and make me fight with him!
Friends
And about my friends, like the quote You meet people who forget you. You forget people you meet. But sometimes you meet those people you can't forget. Those are your friends.
They are those that cannot be forgotten in one’s life. I have friendship with all my classmates and other mates but I have best friends too.My best friends are tecil and Catherine.They help me in all my tough times.
School
My school is my favourite place. Our school have 4 blocks. We have all the facilities there. My teachers are so kind to us.
Hobbies
I have many hobbies. Some of them are singing,reading books etc. My favourite hobby is reading. I like books of Paulo Coelho,Ruskin bond etc.
Ambition
My ambition is to become an oncologist. I chose this work because I would like to help all the cancer patients and help them to lead a better life without sadness.
Thus I would like to conclude my words by saying this quote by Mary McLeod Bethune, Without faith, nothing is possible. With it, nothing is impossible.
Well done, Angela! Excellent effort!
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Birth
I am Angela of Class 8 studying in ens, Sharjah. I was born on the 8th of June 2000. I am 13 years old. I currently live at Abushagara, Sharjah. My hometown is in Pathanamthitta ,Kerala. My mother tongue is Malayalam.
Parents
To tell you about my parents and sibling: my father is an administrative manager and my mom runs her own business of ornament making and stitching. My brother is studying at a college in Sharjah. He is 21 years old. I never start a fight with my brother. It is my brother who always initiates a fight. There are times when I am just sitting quietly and he would start pinching me for no reason! This makes me angry and I end up fighting with him!
Friends
It has been rightly said that "You meet people who forget you. You forget people you meet. But sometimes you meet those people you can't forget. Those are your friends."
Friends are those who cannot be forgotten in one's life. I am friends with all my classmates but I have best friends too.My best friends are Tecil and Catherine.They help me in all my tough times.
School
My school is my favourite place. Our school has 4 blocks. We have all the facilities there. My teachers are very kind to us. They always extend their helping hand in times of need.
Hobbies
I have many hobbies. Some of them are singing,reading books etc. My favourite hobby is reading. I like books of Paulo Coelho,Ruskin bond etc.
Ambition
My ambition is to become an oncologist. I chose this work because I would like to help all the cancer patients and help them to lead a better life without sadness.
I would like to conclude by quoting Mary McLeod Bethune, Without faith, nothing is possible. With it, nothing is impossible.
Thank you.