Please give some points with regard to 'PACKING' chapter from Beehive. 

Dear student,

The answer written by you is an attempt worth appreciating.

However, please find below the corrections in bold that you can make in your answer:

• If Montmorency would have been my pet, I would train him in such a way...
• ...listens to my commands as well.
• It is only when one treats a pet with reverence, would the pet show him respect and become his best friend. (Note: pet should be singular at both places in the sentence)
• Moreover, I would train Montmorency not to roam about at a place where he shouldn't be, I would teach him not be an absolute nuisance and make people go mad at him.
• Lastly, I would train Montmorency to be a good help and not be a hindrance in whatever tasks I perform.

Note: stick to one tense, if you are using 'would' in one sentence then, the entire answer should have the same.

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