Please read the topic and the essay and tell me if it is fine or not. If not, then tell the things that I can add in it.

Dear Student.

Your content doesn't have any grammatical errors. You can also add the facilities that are being provided to the tourists. A better ad campaign, government-run tourist activities and workshops, better websites with online bookings can also help tourists.
Regards.

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I think what the child had written is nice but he / she may add something more to make more impressive
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