Please review my advertisement and suggest changes .
Dear Student,
I am glad to inform you that the advertisement is concise and crisp. You are getting better by the day. Also, you may mention, "fully furnished flat", " close to schools". Nonetheless, it is a good advertisement.
Regards
I am glad to inform you that the advertisement is concise and crisp. You are getting better by the day. Also, you may mention, "fully furnished flat", " close to schools". Nonetheless, it is a good advertisement.
Regards