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Please tell is this correct, also,there is one more page I will
click it in the answers section of this question Please tell is the
language correct or not

Sucheta Priyadarsini Sahu · Accepted Answer

Dear Student,

You have written a very good answer Please consider making the
following minor changes:-

city football team - ( not city Football team - as football is
a common noun) (Page 1, last line)
surprisingly - ( not surprising) (Page 2 - first line)
admitted through sports quota ( for greater clarity, you can
add the word 'through sports quota' )

Regards,

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