Pls correct the mistakes

Dear student,

Your effort is commendable.
Corrections are as follows:
- In  an informal letter, your own address is given at the top left corner, the recipient's address is not mentioned.
- After the address, leave a line and write the date please.
- Put a full stop after 'labour hard in the evening'.
- Start 'With best regards to you and love to mother' next to the margin. Note, there is no 'a' before 'best regards'.
- Put a comma after 'Your loving daughter'.

Regards