Pls correct the wrong things in this formal letter

Dear student,

- The gist of the letter is correct.
- Start all paragraphs next to the margin on the left side of the page. This is the Block method of writing letters.
- Underline the subject please.
- Do not repeat 'therefore' in subsequent sentences.
- Check spellings please: Yours obediently, etc.
- There are some formatting and grammatical errors. Kindly refer to the sample leave letter carefully to understand all errors so that you may rectify them.

37,
Malviya Nagar,
Jaipur.


11 October, 2019

The Principal
Steps School
Jaipur 


Respected Madam,

Subject: Application for leave

This is to bring to your kind notice that I am studying in Class VIII A of your school. My brother's marriage has been scheduled to be held on the 22nd of this month. I will not be able to attend school for a week as there would be a lot of guests at home and I will have to help my parents in the preparations and looking after the guests. 

Kindly grant me leave from 20th October to 26th October. I assure you that I'll cover the work in school during my absence.
Kindly grant the leave and oblige.

Yours sincerely,
ABC



Regards

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Please find this answer

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Prove that root 2 plus root 3 is an irrational no.
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Spelling obediently
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Always write sender's and receiver's address in 3 lines.
Do sender's signature below "yours obediently"
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Write a standardized subject. Your subject seems poor!
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I want to inform you that iam suffering........
instead of I beg u.
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