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Dear Student,
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We have complained about the use of loudspeakers many times, but no necessary action has been taken till now. We are fed up with the noise it creates. Nobody wants to hurt the religious sentiments of the people but their practices should not cause discomfort to others.
I hope you will provide a proper space to my views so that a proper illation can be drawn for this problem.
Yours faithfully,
Ravpreet Kaur
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Regards
Here are the improvements for the write-up given in the image:
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We have complained about the use of loudspeakers many times, but no necessary action has been taken till now. We are fed up with the noise it creates. Nobody wants to hurt the religious sentiments of the people but their practices should not cause discomfort to others.
I hope you will provide a proper space to my views so that a proper illation can be drawn for this problem.
Yours faithfully,
Ravpreet Kaur
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Regards