Pls find all the mistakes and suggest some new words so that it is to be made more attractive

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Please check a clearer image of the answer, as the whole passage cannot be read and understood easily. Please post in a new thread. However, please make the following changes in the last paragraph.
  • Begging should not be promoted and a proper investigation must be made.
  • Some beggars are gangsters and kidnappers.
  • This makes us worry about the lives of people.
  • we give alms to beggars, who reside in temples and in front of wedding halls.
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