plz check its grammer mistakes ....................
Rubal and Nakush are two friends.they are friends from 1st std,now they study in 11th std.there parents work at same office, and they always go on
bussiness trip.
Oe day when rubal parents were out for bussiness trip.he calles Nakush to his home to stay with him and have fun.At night on 8'o clock,both were
watching t.v they saw one horror show and started to laugh on them suddenly lights goes off.They said to each other lets have fun so they started to
fill entire house with lighted candles.Then nakush act as if a ghost entered into his body.He said"rubal,i know you are very good boy,dont wander
around and watch t.v,go to bed and sleep" they both laughes,suddenly nakush phone rang,it was his mom phone,she was going outside so she want
nakush to come home and take care of his little sister.
Nakush invited rubal to his house to stay with him.they both started to walk to reach his house,they both came acrosss a steert,which was silent as it
was 9'o clock at night.They realised that someone was walking behind them,both looked back there was a lady,she was looking from a nice family so
they decided to help her
Rubal gently asked the lady"Mam,why are you hear at this time? Lady replied wth soft tone that her house is near and she is just taking evening walk
she said"i know you both are good boys,dont wander around and watch t.v,go to bed and sleep'so they both started to walk in opposite deirection to
reach rubal's house.They realised that Nakush told the same dialog to Rubal,So they turned back to look for lady but lady was gone ...............

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Rubal and Nakush were two friends. They had been friends since the 1st std. Now were in the 11th std. Their parents worked at the same office and they always went on business trips.

One day when Rubal's parents were on a business trip, he called Nakush to his home to stay with him and have fun. At night at 8 o'clock, both were watching TV. They watched a horror show and started to laugh when suddenly the lights went off. They decided to have fun and so they filled entire house with lighted candles. Then Nakush acted as if a ghost had entered into his body. He said, "Rubal, I know you are very good boy. But don't wander around and watch TV. Go to bed and sleep." They both very happy. 

Suddenly Nakush's phone rang; it was from his mom. She was going outside so she wanted Nakush to come home and take care of his little sister. Nakush invited Rubal to his house to stay with him. On their way, they came across a street which was quite silent and deserted as it was quite late at night. They realised that someone was walking behind them. Both looked back and they saw that there was a lady who looked as if she belonged from a nice family. So they decided to help her. Rubal gently asked the lady, "Ma'am, why are you here at this time? " The lady replied in a soft tone that her house was nearby and that she was just taking an evening walk. She said, "I know you both are good boys, don't wander around and watch TV. Go to bed and sleep." As the boys started walking in the opposite direction to reach Rubal's house, they suddenly realised that Nakush had told the same dialogue to Rubal. They turned back to look for the lady but she was gone. 

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Rubal and Nakush are two friends. They are friends from 1st STD, now they study in 11th std.there parents work at same office, and they always go on

Business trip.

One day when rubal parents were out for business trip, he calls Nakush to his home to stay with him and have fun at night on 8 'o clock, both were

Watching TV they saw one horror show and started to laugh on them suddenly lights goes off. They said to each other lets have fun so they started to

Fill entire house with lighted candles. Then nakush act as if a ghost entered into his body. He said"rubal, I know you are very good boy, don’t wander

Around and watch t.v, go to bed and sleep" they both laughes, suddenly nakush phone rang, it was his mom phone, she was going outside so she want

Nakush to come home and take care of his little sister.

Nakush invited rubal to his house to stay with him.they both started to walk to reach his house,they both came acrosss a steert,which was silent as it

was 9 'o clock at night.They realised that someone was walking behind them,both looked back there was a lady,she was looking from a nice family so

they decided to help her

Rubal gently asked the lady"Mam,why are you hear at this time? Lady replied wth soft tone that her house is near and she is just taking evening walk

she said"i know you both are good boys,dont wander around and watch t.v,go to bed and sleep 'so they both started to walk in opposite deirection to

reach rubal 's house.They realised that Nakush told the same dialog to Rubal,So they turned back to look for lady but lady was gone ...............

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