Plz check this report writing.
Write a report on cyclone wind hit Digha.
Points:-1)CYLONIC WINDS EXTREME TIDAL WAVE OF 8 TO 10 HEIGHT FLOODING THE SEA BEACH.THE TOWN OF DIGHA FLOODED.MAIN ROAD UNDER 6 FEET WATER.
2)MAJOR HOTEL UNDER 4 TO 6 FEET WATER.TOURIST.ELECTRICITY AND WATER SUPPLY DISRUPTED.100 OF BOULDETS WASHED AWAY BY WATER.
3)A ONE KM WALL PROTECTING THE BEACH ALSO DESTROYED.
4)PLAN TO REPAIR DAMAGE ON AN URGENT BASIS BEING DRAWN UP BY THE GOVERNMENT.THOUGH IT MAY TAKE TIME BUT IT WILL REPAIRED.
1. Heading: Cyclone Hits Digha ('in' is not required).
2. Extreme cyclonic wind of extreme tidal wave: incorrect; instead, write: 'Extreme cyclonic wind along with extreme tidal waves'.
3. 'in the noon of the day': 'at noon on that day'.
4. 'took deep of water....'- 'The road was submerged under.....'
5. Please use past tense consistently.
6. 'boulders washed under water'- 'boulders washed away by water'
7. Please use helping verbs to make complete sentences from the given points: 'was, were, etc.'
2. Extreme cyclonic wind of extreme tidal wave: incorrect; instead, write: 'Extreme cyclonic wind along with extreme tidal waves'.
3. 'in the noon of the day': 'at noon on that day'.
4. 'took deep of water....'- 'The road was submerged under.....'
5. Please use past tense consistently.
6. 'boulders washed under water'- 'boulders washed away by water'
7. Please use helping verbs to make complete sentences from the given points: 'was, were, etc.'