Plz tell the analytical paragraph is correct or not ?????
Dear Student,
The analysis in the paragraph done is correct. There are minor grammatical errors that need to be corrected. For example, year should be years and literate rate should be literacy rate.
The first line should be "The given data graph shows..." Instead of saying, it has been increasing, it should be said "it has been increasing since then" or "it has been on rise" or 'more urban/rural male/female received literacy" in different spaces.
Regards
The analysis in the paragraph done is correct. There are minor grammatical errors that need to be corrected. For example, year should be years and literate rate should be literacy rate.
The first line should be "The given data graph shows..." Instead of saying, it has been increasing, it should be said "it has been increasing since then" or "it has been on rise" or 'more urban/rural male/female received literacy" in different spaces.
Regards
