Q. Edit it.
  1. In today's world that is easy to 
  2. grow up with inculcating reading 
  3. habits. There is so many television 
  4. programmes computer games or the 
  5. playstation to keep me busy 
  6. For, those not only serve as 
  7. entertainment gadgets and are 
  8. educational two at the same time 

Those should be changed to they; serve should be left as serve, not changed; 
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2nd line with should be chnged to by
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3rd last line it should be these instead of those
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Edit it. In today's world that is easy to grow up with inculcating reading habits. There is so many television programmes computer games or the playstation to keep me busy For, those not only serve as entertainment gadgets and are educational two at the same tim
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