She hated being called by other students in her school and cried till night in her room Only Bruce - English - Punctuations

Question

She hated being called by other students in her school and cried
till night in her room Only Bruce comforted her then Now been
called this by his own cousin was too much for her But then she
thought that it was her own fault She called him `fatty’ and
then he retaliated
correct it

Bharath Kappet · Accepted Answer

Dear student

The answers are -

She hated being called (called what?) by other students in her
school and cried all night in her room - You should mention what
she was called Otherwise, the sentence looks incomplete If this
sentence follows a sentence that mentions what she is called, then
you need not mention it again

Only Bruce comforted her then Now being called this by his (or
her?) own cousin was too much for her (Being called this by
his cousin or her cousin? Is this
person Jane’s cousin or Bruce’s cousin?)

But then she thought that it was her own fault She called him
'fatty' and then he retaliated

Regards

She hated being called by other students in her school and cried till night in her room .Only Bruce comforted her then. Now been called this by his own cousin was too much for her . But then she thought that it was her own fault She called him `fatty’ and then he retaliated . correct it

She hated being called by other students in her school and cried till night in her room .Only Bruce comforted her then. Now been called this by his own cousin was too much for her . But then she thought that it was her own fault She called him `fatty’ and then he retaliated .
correct it