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essex farm is the famous resort--

it is located in aurbindo---

marg it has the bowling alley and---

lots with games for children to play the---

multi cuisine restaurants add for the charm--

this resort gives you the choice of air--

conditioned rooms here one do enjoy ---

a water park with slides etc..

1. Essex Farm is the famous resort--  instead of 'the' write 'a'

2. It is located in Aurbindo--- instead of 'in' it should be 'on'

3. Marg it has the bowling alley and---instead of 'the' write 'a'

4. lots with games for children to play the---instead of 'with' write 'of'

5. multi cuisine restaurants add for the charm--instead of 'for' write 'to'

6. 
this resort gives you the choice of air--no need of 'you'

7. conditioned rooms here one do enjoy --- instead of 'do' write 'can'

8. a water park with slides etc.. no change

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