the passage has not been edited essex farm is the famous resort-- it is located in aurbindo--- marg it has - English - Error Correction Editing

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the passage has not been edited
essex farm is the famous resort--
it is located in aurbindo---
marg it has the bowling alley and---
lots with games for children to play the---
multi cuisine restaurants add for the charm--
this resort gives you the choice of air--
conditioned rooms here one do enjoy ---
a water park with slides etc

Tanveer Jehan · Accepted Answer

1 Essex Farm is the
famous resort-- instead of 'the' write 'a'
2 It is located in
Aurbindo--- instead of 'in' it should be 'on'
3 Marg it has the
bowling alley and---instead of 'the' write 'a'

4 lots with games for children to play the---instead of 'with'
write 'of'
5 multi cuisine
restaurants add for the charm--instead of 'for' write 'to'

6 this resort gives you the choice of air--no need of
'you'
7 conditioned rooms
here one do enjoy --- instead of 'do' write 'can'
8 a water park with
slides etc no change