There is an ommision in each of the lines against which a blank is given:-
Jill Drake is world's largest screamer. e.g. istheworld's
During a trip London in 2000,Jill a) -----
entered a screaming competition held the b) -----
the Millennium dome and surprised c) ----
to discover her 129 decibel howl d) ----
was world record. Her record-breaking e) ----
yell is as loud a pneumatic drill f) ----
and only 10 decibels lower the sound g) ----
of a jumbo jet taking off. Jills's
record remains unbeaten date. h) ----
The paragraph with the necessary changes are:
Jill Drake is the world's largest screamer.
During a trip to London in 2000, Jill
entered a screaming competition held at the
Millennium dome and was surprised
to discover that her 129 decibel howl
was a world record. Her record-breaking
yell is as loud as a pneumatic drill
and only 10 decibels lower than the sound
of a jumbo jet taking off. Jill's
record remains unbeaten till date.