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Question

When the family paid a visit of Ross and company in the opera
house in Mumbai, sudha happened to notice a famous Jaipur foot of
one of the showcases of the company There she learns of Dr Parmod
sethi, famous for his 'jaipur foot'
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Roopam Pandey · Accepted Answer

Dear student,

When the family paid a visit of Ross and company in
the opera house in Mumbai, sudha happened to notice a famous Jaipur
foot of one of the showcases of the company There she learns of Dr
Parmod sethi, famous for his 'jaipur foot'

Answer:

When the family paid a visit
to Ross and company
at the
Opera
House in Mumbai,
Sudha happened to notice
the famous Jaipur foot
as one of the showcases of the
company There she learns of Dr Parmod sethi, who
is famous for his 'jaipur foot'

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When the family paid a visit of Ross and company in the opera house in Mumbai, sudha happened to notice a famous Jaipur foot of one of the showcases of the company . There she learns of Dr. Parmod sethi, famous for his 'jaipur foot' .

When the family paid a visit of Ross and company in the opera house in Mumbai, sudha happened to notice a famous Jaipur foot of one of the showcases of the company . There she learns of Dr. Parmod sethi, famous for his 'jaipur foot' .