Write a letter to your friend about how you celebrated swarasati puja yesterday.
Please check my?? letter.

Dear student,

The corrections are as follows:
- Include the statement of purpose of writing the letter in the first paragraph itself.
- Do not capitalise words mid-sentence except for proper noun, abbreviations and pronoun 'I'.
- I was delighted (it means very happy).
- Spelling: altar
- Used as the subject of a sentence, it is 'my sister and I'
- beside the statue of
- Unable to understand what is written after 'impressed'
- Use 'the best' (not most best)
- we played games and watched TV
- how you celebrated
- My love to you!

Regards