You are reena of 85 Ramesh Nagar New Delhi Write a letter in 100 to 120 words to - English - Formal Letter

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You are reena of 85 Ramesh Nagar New Delhi Write a letter in 100 to
120 words to the general manager , DTC , complaining about
violations of advisory on social distancing in buses in your area
and urging him to take urgent steps in this matter

Plz tell this letter is correct or not

Yash Raj · Accepted Answer

Dear Student

Here are the errors in your answer:

The format of letter isn't appropriate
It should be, "I want to draw your attention "
"The cases have been rising recently "
Write this in a separate line: "Thousands of people travel in
buses daily "
"They cannot follow social distancing "
"This is risky for other people as well "
The second half of the matter written by you is not
relevant
Try to add more sentences in your letter, like what kind of
restrictions should be imposed to limit the spread

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You are reena of 85 Ramesh Nagar New Delhi . Write a letter in 100 to 120 words to the general manager , DTC , complaining about violations of advisory on social distancing in buses in your area and urging him to take urgent steps in this matter Plz tell this letter is correct or not

You are reena of 85 Ramesh Nagar New Delhi . Write a letter in 100 to 120 words to the general manager , DTC , complaining about violations of advisory on social distancing in buses in your area and urging him to take urgent steps in this matter

Plz tell this letter is correct or not