here is a poem,if it is good than give me thum up & if it is not good give me thum down and also tell that how it should be. Help me experts & members.

FAIRY

There was a fairy tring,tring,tring

she has a bell sounds ring,ring,ring

she fly in the sky & sing,sing,sing.

she looks in the sky,like a tiny fly

But she's like a butterfly

she trie to look like a supper star

But she din't no,she has a supper car.

She look so good,she look so cool

she is a fairy with a little story.

Your effort in composing a poem is amazingly superb. We appreciate such talent and passion in students towards English literature. One thing that you should always keep in mind while composing anything is that there should be unity of tense. You should always continue the same tense with which you begin the first thought of your composition. The beginning word of every line should be capitalised. It is always good to use rhyming words, but even if your words do not rhyme and yet they convey a meaningful sense, we can call that composition a poem. 

Your poem can be re-written as this one, with a few minor changes. Hope you like it!

FAIRY 

There was a fairy tring, tring, tring

Sound of her bell went ring,ring,ring

She flew in the sky to sing,sing,sing.

She seemed like a fly in the blue sky

But she was beautiful like a butterfly

She wanted to become a super star

But she didn't know she already had a super car.

She looked so good, she looked so cool

She was the only fairy with a swimming pool!