check out this essay about journey to space.
- Rephrase first sentence:
Space is a three dimensional region and it begins where the atmosphere of the earth finishes.
- Spelling:
soldier
- two months of special training
- Last sentence:
I will never get bored of talking about this experience.
- Avoid repeating: then, when. Instead, use 'afterwards, next, later, etc.'
- Rephrase: meteors and comets run very speedy- meteors and comets move at great speeds
- rephrase: put me in a short test- I underwent medical examinations, written tests to check my cognitive abilities, etc.
Space is a three dimensional region and it begins where the atmosphere of the earth finishes.
- Spelling:
soldier
- two months of special training
- Last sentence:
I will never get bored of talking about this experience.
- Avoid repeating: then, when. Instead, use 'afterwards, next, later, etc.'
- Rephrase: meteors and comets run very speedy- meteors and comets move at great speeds
- rephrase: put me in a short test- I underwent medical examinations, written tests to check my cognitive abilities, etc.